BrainKing - Дискусии (Poetry)

Относно: Re: Time

danoschek: Thanks!

27. февруари 2005, 02:52:29

danoschek

Относно: Re: Time

Mindy: nice rhythm and an appealing vibration ...

...

... ~*~

26. февруари 2005, 23:24:48

MindyzTaken

Относно: Re: Time

Stardust: Thanks!

Im not very good at writing poetry,but I try,lol!

26. февруари 2005, 21:53:50

Относно: Re: Time

Mindy: Aaah Sweet Nostalgia!
Very nice Mindy

26. февруари 2005, 19:53:10

MindyzTaken

Относно: Time

Променен от MindyzTaken (26. февруари 2005, 20:28:49)

Take me back to the time
when things were simple-
when playing football in the street,
king of the mountain & marco polo
was such a blast-
Take me back to the time
when things were innocent-
playing marbles in the schoolyard
with the rest of the boys & girls,
barbie dolls,army men & matchbox cars,
Yeah,those were cool back then~
Take me back to the time
when good feelings and laughter
spilled from everywhere-
Grandma knitting,Grandpa working with wood-
homemade this and homemade that~
Kickball,soccer,dodgeball,climbing trees,
coloring books and pick up stix..
Yeah,those were cool back then.

Time...Where did you go?
I miss you so.

25. февруари 2005, 21:26:05

Относно: Re: the highway man

Bebs: Perhaps jokes would be more appropiate on the Jokes DB. This DB is for posting of original poems by the poster and discussion of all poetry.

25. февруари 2005, 20:48:29

Относно: Re: the highway man

Cathy1:

well yeah but the peoplo on the joke bord wont know what im talking about.

25. февруари 2005, 20:45:24

Относно: Re: the highway man

ArtfulDodger: speak to you on general chat about ti.

25. февруари 2005, 20:44:44

Относно: Re: the highway man

ArtfulDodger: yep thats right! why do you do this- ;0

25. февруари 2005, 20:42:29

Относно: Re: the highway man

Bebs: I knew it wasn't by you but I didn't get the joke. But then I'm just a little monkey! ;0

25. февруари 2005, 20:40:58

Относно: Re: the highway man

ArtfulDodger: this page is for poetry not general chat if i were you ill speak about this on general chat.

25. февруари 2005, 20:39:57

Относно: Re: the highway man

ArtfulDodger: every one should know it wasnt by me.

25. февруари 2005, 20:38:43

Относно: Re: the highway man

Bebs: :) I'm still trying to figure out the joke. ;)

25. февруари 2005, 20:36:23

Относно: Re: the highway man

ArtfulDodger: hello? it was a joke.

25. февруари 2005, 20:34:49

Относно: Re: the highway man

Cathy1:

bet you diddnt get the joke.

25. февруари 2005, 20:34:28

http://www.ugcs.caltech.edu/~emma/poetry/poetry.html

25. февруари 2005, 20:33:57

Относно: Re: the highway man

Cathy1: Alfred Noyes

25. февруари 2005, 20:33:55

Относно: Re: the highway man

Cathy1: that was a joke- diddnt you get it?

25. февруари 2005, 20:29:51

CathyAK

Относно: Re: the highway man

Bebs:

Nice poem--but it is not by you.

In fact, many of us older folks probably had to memorize this poem, or part of it, when we were in school many years ago. I know I did.

25. февруари 2005, 20:24:36

Относно: the highway man

this is a poem- the wind was a torrent of darkness among the gusty trees, the moon was a ghostly galleon tossed up on cloudy seas, the road was a ribbon of moonlight over the purple moor and the highwayman came riding,riding,riding the highwayman came riding over the purple moor.

he had a french cocked hat on his forhead, a bunch of lace at his chin, a claret velvet cloak. his pistol butts a twinkle, his rapier hits the twinkle under the jewwled sky.

by me aged 9.

14. февруари 2005, 10:27:24

Относно: Andrew

This deep forever love...
is it real?

Can it be all I've ever needed
more than i can feel?

To know you
to see you
just to watch you from afar

what joy
my heart aches
my love actually grows
stronger
more vibrant
daily

Is it possible to love this much
will it break my heart
tomorrow
forever

until the sands of time
run out

And as I watch you
you drift further from me
I will never leave
because
for you
my Son
my Love only grows...

July 6,2004

12. февруари 2005, 01:25:14

Относно: Re: Valentine's Day poetry contest

Cathy1: If you would wish a friend a happy Valentine's Day,or a family member or even a pet,then I think we should include all kinds of love for our little contest :-)

12. февруари 2005, 01:13:43

CathyAK

Относно: Valentine's Day poetry contest

Since the subject is love, does this mean specifically romantic love, or does it include friendship and other types of love?

8. февруари 2005, 06:31:54

alanback

Относно: Posting in other languages

I see no reason why a player can't post in his own language if he chooses, knowing that the majority of readers will not understand . . . it might even be an opportunity for others to post their own translations!
Personally, I love the cadence and resonance of German verse, even if I don't get all of it.

8. февруари 2005, 03:12:32

Относно: Re: Poem translations ...

Sumerian: Since the majority of participants in this discussion board speak english,that is the preferred language of the contest.

8. февруари 2005, 00:42:40

SMIRF Engine

Относно: Re: Poem translations ...

to Stardust: to translate a poem is about the hardest task at all for a translater. Will English language poems then also be translated into German, the widest spreaded native language in western Europe?

8. февруари 2005, 00:22:28

Относно: Re: Two questions

Tuesday: Yes,because it's a Valentine's Day contest,the theme should be centered around love.
If all goes well with this contest perhaps we'll have another one after the 14th to include any theme

7. февруари 2005, 23:57:05

Относно: Re: Two questions

Cerebro: I haven't decided how the voting process should work and I am open to suggestions and ideas.
Entrants are encouraged to submit as many poems as they like. A poet's favourite may not necessarily be their best.

7. февруари 2005, 23:54:50

Относно: Re: Is this board international ?

Sumerian: For anyone considering submitting an original poem for the contest in a language other than english,might I suggest an english translation accompany it.
I know the english translation will lose the effect of the original,but I'm sure voters will bear that in mind when voting.

7. февруари 2005, 12:28:46

SMIRF Engine

Относно: Re: Is this board international ?

Променен от SMIRF Engine (7. февруари 2005, 12:29:59)

to Radiant 36 9: a) "Yes, this board is international, but we mainly communicate in English" ==> as you will have noticed, I communicate using the English language as good as it might be possible for me. But my question was not targeting the way, how a poem should be discussed, but how it should be written. I am convinced that it is very hard to write a serious poem using not one's own native language.
b) "It should only be allowed to post own stuff. --> is that a question or a remark?" ==> both. This is my opinion, and I wanted to know, whether that is handled here that way.

7. февруари 2005, 12:09:48

Относно: Re: Is this board international ?

Sumerian: Yes, this board is international, but we mainly communicate in English. Correct please, me if im wrong! :-)

b) It should only be allowed to post own stuff. --> is that a question or a remark?

7. февруари 2005, 11:35:28

SMIRF Engine

Относно: Is this board international ?

a) What is about lyrics e.g. in German language?
b) It should only be allowed to post own stuff.

7. февруари 2005, 02:25:50

Dolittle

Относно: Re: Holding Hands

ScarletRose: Thanks for that info, I will check it out. I love poetry but am not good at writing.

6. февруари 2005, 07:51:25

PhatPlaya 臭臭小指

Относно: Two questions

Who is keeping tally of the votes? Can a person submit more than one poem?

6. февруари 2005, 03:35:16

Относно: Re: Poetry contest

Radiant 36 9: I'm open to suggestions. Here are my ideas...

Anyone can vote.
Anyone can submit an original poem.
Deadline for entries is midnight Feb 13 (EST).
It is not ethical to vote for yourself.

6. февруари 2005, 01:00:15

Относно: Re: Poetry contest

Stardust: Who will be in the jury and can they also send in poems and until when can we post our Valentine's Poetry?

6. февруари 2005, 00:58:20

alanback

Относно: Thanks everyone

Thanks for your kind words. I am very fortunate indeed.

6. февруари 2005, 00:35:03

Относно: Re: Holding Hands

alanback: Thank you for sharing your moving site, Alan.. Very genuine style of writing you have!

5. февруари 2005, 13:25:56

Относно: Favourite poets?

Променен от Nirvana (5. февруари 2005, 13:27:31)

Cecil Day~Lewis ~ who also wrote books as Nicholas Blake. 1904-1972

'Shall I be gone long?
For ever and a day
To whom there belong?
Ask the stone to say.
Ask my song'

is on his gravestone.

5. февруари 2005, 13:24:11

Относно: Re: Holding Hands

alanback: very moving.

5. февруари 2005, 13:07:22

Desert Hike

I also have permission from Raymond French to post this.
As with the first one, there is an option to see more work by these excellent poets, well worth doing.

5. февруари 2005, 13:03:12

Променен от Nirvana (5. февруари 2005, 13:04:23)

Soul Survivor

(I have permission from Houdini's Ghost to do this!)

5. февруари 2005, 09:02:09

ScarletRose

Относно: Re: Holding Hands

Dolittle: www.poetry.com
search author.. Higgs, Cathryn.. those are mine.. as well as the Cathryn Ann one.. :) Enjoy

Also wanted to comment on Alanbacks site.. very nicely done Alan.. it is great in this day and age to see such a loving couple.. and I mean that sincerely.. you two truly seem to have a great relationship.. and a lovely family..

5. февруари 2005, 06:19:53

Dolittle

Относно: Re: Holding Hands

alanback:Thanks for the addy, I will go read your poetry!

5. февруари 2005, 02:40:10

alanback

Относно: Re: Holding Hands

Dolittle: Seems the muse doesn't strike me that often. What I have written is mostly available at my web page, www.alancathcart.com

4. февруари 2005, 11:25:01

Относно: Re: Poetry contest

Stardust: lovely!

4. февруари 2005, 11:14:27