Looking up she swings her hand to shield her eyes and stares directly into the eyes of.....

a tiny field mouse.




One of the things, in my opinion, are stories that surprise the reader's emotions, or being able to change the emotion of the reader. This is what keeps people reading. Was the introduction of a new character out of line? Obviously, it was a workable post as the storyline easily went on.

If people choose to make long, descriptive posts, that's great. If people choose to make short to the point posts, they should have that right too. Being this is a public board, all posts should be encouraged as long as they are on topic.

Clearly, my post of "a tiny field mouse" completed the thought of the poster before me.

a tiny field mouse.

Nirvana: OH, so that was your contribution to the story. I didn't realize. Posting the sites where the stories can be found might be interesting to people here so they can read the original words and stories.

Nirvana: I'll ask again, being that my post was mysteriously deleted. I feel that this is on topic and at the very least deserves a reply.

Shouldn't the excerpt below be credited to this site?



I'm sorry, but I'm really not comfortable with a link to a site with quite a lot of material which is unsuitable for young children (I won't allow my 12 yr old on it) being posted here.