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 Poetry

An outlet for players whose creativity extends beyond the board. Post your original works here!

The posting of song lyrics is not the purpose of this board and as such please refrain from doing so. Exceptions can be made to this rule if you are the copyrighted owner of the lyrics and the lyrics are not found offensive by the majority of the population.
This board is a place to post your original works of poetry and prose and also a place for discussion of poetry and related areas.

We have received word from Fencer that other's poetry can be posted to this board. These are the two conditions:
1) When someone posts a known copyrighted poem, he must add the author's name as well
2) If the author is not known, the poem can be posted without problems


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28. Августа 2007, 17:11:26
An Cat Dubh 
Субъект: Re:
Tuesday: Where beest thou from?

9. Августа 2007, 10:48:29
An Cat Dubh 
Субъект: Re: Very sad news
WellyWales: Yehi zikhra barukh, may her memory be blessèd.

2. Июля 2007, 15:28:39
An Cat Dubh 
Субъект: Re: Twin Flames
Stardust: Kinda emo.

3. Мая 2007, 19:38:01
An Cat Dubh 
Субъект:
(warabe/tóng, child. Hey, if Oscar Wilde can use Greek, Latin, and French in the titles of his poems, I can have Chinese characters!)

Oh! greatest reasure of them all,
One day you'll hear Nature's call,
Like great Saul thou shall fall,
To Oblivion in thy pall.

29. Марта 2007, 08:46:58
An Cat Dubh 
Субъект: Re: Poems
Foxy Lady: The problem is they're Hebrew... And they're in the school library, and now's Passover... (which reminds me: Happy Passover, everyone!)

28. Марта 2007, 13:28:31
An Cat Dubh 
Субъект: Re: Poems
Foxy Lady: How about 'Poems of Egypt Plagues' by Natan Alterman?

20. Марта 2007, 15:06:12
An Cat Dubh 
Субъект: Re:
Foxy Lady: And please remember this is the 3rd millenium.

16. Марта 2007, 16:14:06
An Cat Dubh 
Субъект: Re: You are a Positive Thinker
Haridaspal: Well, it can be interpreted as such, but I find it to be a rather vulgar form of poetry. (Oh Buddha, I sound so gay...)

16. Марта 2007, 14:35:37
An Cat Dubh 
Субъект: Re: Here's a poem I wrote today:
Ditty^Doo: Oops...

6. Марта 2007, 12:17:05
An Cat Dubh 
Субъект: Re: Quite Alright!
Ditty^Doo: I didn't mispell it. It's British spelling.

5. Марта 2007, 21:34:48
An Cat Dubh 
Субъект: Re: Haikus
Stardust: Yup. Look at it twisting your head 90 degrees to the left.

5. Марта 2007, 15:37:01
An Cat Dubh 
Субъект: Re: Haikus
rednaz23: XD

4. Марта 2007, 21:31:23
An Cat Dubh 
Субъект: Re: Haikus
Ditty^Doo: No offence, but haikus are supposed to be poems of three lines consisting of 5-7-5 syllables, speaking about nature in an allegoric-philosophoc way. (I know, what I wrote cannot really be seen as a haiku, but that was before I understood what haikus are all about. Nowadays, I write my haikus completely different, and mainly in Hebrew.)

7. Февраля 2007, 08:57:16
An Cat Dubh 
Субъект: Re: Memory
Haridaspal: You remind me of that greek poet, Simonidas (I think that's how his nam'es spelled).

1. Января 2007, 10:50:57
An Cat Dubh 
Субъект: Re: Happy New Years
Foxy Lady: :) A toi et a tout le monde aussi!

20. Декабря 2006, 21:10:41
An Cat Dubh 
Субъект: Re: A Soldies Christmas
Foxy Lady: You should read 'Stop Night' (ליל חניה) by Natan Alterman (נתן אלתרמן). And quit the Kitch.

30. Ноября 2006, 12:54:31
An Cat Dubh 
Субъект: Re:
Foxy Lady: Ah! It makes me want to stop being an atheist...

16. Ноября 2006, 13:55:49
An Cat Dubh 
Субъект: Re: Shiva's Blessing - to a Point
Haridaspal: Very nice! Say, how old are you? in what languages do you usually write?

15. Ноября 2006, 21:27:14
An Cat Dubh 
Субъект: Re: Chori chori ....
Haridaspal: Thank you!

14. Ноября 2006, 16:19:13
An Cat Dubh 
Субъект: Re: Going to the Moon?

Haridaspal: Very nice!


You know, I think I just found myself a soul mate...


Say, unrelatedly, can you tell me what does 'chori chori hangorise hyangaringe' (hope I'm spelling it properly...) mean? It's from some Bollywood song that is very popular in Israel, but I doubt anyone knows what it means...


12. Сентября 2006, 15:54:23
An Cat Dubh 
Субъект: Here's a poem I wrote today:
Сделано для An Cat Dubh (12. Сентября 2006, 15:57:12)
The Heavenly Damsel and the Red Rose

The Heavenly damsel descends to the earth
To once again join her love.
Her coming is signaled from miles away
By the cry of the dove.
Countless riders have ridden their steeds
After giving a red rose to their wives.
Most of them have yet to return
The rest have already lost their lives.
As horrible massacres still proceed
The Heavenly Damsel looks forth as she steps.
The Rose, which she holds tight between her velvet fingers
Goes deep into her heart, reaching its depths.
Commanders yell to enforce the spirits
Of the men who are willing to die for a king.
Such a great deal of them have lost
The ability to once again sing.
Dark clouds cloud all the bright sun rays
And rain washes all tears and blood.
Bravest hearts and noblest steeds
Have all descended to plain filth and mud.
The Heavenly Damsel still has no fear
Her Eyes still remaining on her goal.
But once she reaches her destination
All her hopes burn like charcoal.
The rain is gone like all dark clouds
But all the battlefield has turned red.
And in the sea of soldiers’ corpses
She finds her beloved husband dead.
Then tears burst out of her two eyes
And she places the Red Rose on his chest.
‘Alas,’ she says, ‘‘tis my last tribute,
I hope now you may finally rest.’

Perhaps this is just another one
Of God’s tests?

3. Сентября 2006, 18:27:00
An Cat Dubh 
Субъект: Haiku for the new schoolyear!

Today was the first day of school for the junior highs and high schools. I was inspired by the event (and the intimidation) and wrote this haiku:


נחליאלי כבר \ מהלך לו בשדות \ ספירה לאחור (nakhliéli kvár / mehalékh lo basadót / sfirá le'akhór)


which means:


A wagtail already / Walks in the fields / Countdown


(The wagtail in Israel is a clear symbol of autumn.)


What do you think?


1. Сентября 2006, 14:03:11
An Cat Dubh 
Субъект: Re: One to inspire and two to follow through
Haridaspal: Heh, I can write darker, but I write in Hebrew, and it's NOT funny.

19. Июля 2006, 15:18:13
An Cat Dubh 
Субъект: I suppose...
Haiku is too sophisticated for you... Otherwise you would have said something...

16. Июля 2006, 22:34:46
An Cat Dubh 
Субъект: Haikus

Does anyone write any? I write millions of them! Here is an example:


たいとした 素晴しいこと 夢を見る (Transliteration: taito shita / subarashii koto / yume wo miru; English: I saw a dragon in it's flight / It is a wonderful thing / To dream)


*Note: I couldn't type the original character for it. It is not supported by Unicode, or at least by my computer.


Another example:


あの人と もう合わないな… あら?光? (Transliteration: ano hito to / mou awanai na... / ara? hikari?; English: With that person / I will never meet again... / Eh? Light?)


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