BrainKing - Vestlusgrupid (Poetry)

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Poetry

An outlet for players whose creativity extends beyond the board. Post your original works here!

The posting of song lyrics is not the purpose of this board and as such please refrain from doing so. Exceptions can be made to this rule if you are the copyrighted owner of the lyrics and the lyrics are not found offensive by the majority of the population.
This board is a place to post your original works of poetry and prose and also a place for discussion of poetry and related areas.

We have received word from Fencer that other's poetry can be posted to this board. These are the two conditions:
1) When someone posts a known copyrighted poem, he must add the author's name as well
2) If the author is not known, the poem can be posted without problems

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17. august 2004, 21:32:48

footballgirl

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Teema: Re:My First Poem

Thatk you so much! I'll let you know what happens!:)

17. august 2004, 06:28:52

footballgirl

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Teema: Re: My first poem

Thank you for your advice PowerPygmie, it means a lot to me. I'veknown him my entire life, but never said two words to him until last year. I don't know that he knows I like him, but people have said he does. Like I said, we were becoming very close until one of my supposed friends came in and I don't know how to describe it. Long story short, he hangs out with her all the time, and even though she says he's annoying to her, I like him a lot. Sorry for burdening you with this issue of mine, but if it's okay with you, you can give me at least one more tip!:) Thank you so much!

17. august 2004, 06:13:19

footballgirl

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Teema: My first poem

I need advice on whether I should give this poem to somebody that I've liked for a while or not. I wrote it for him...

"Words Aren't Enough"
I've never had a boyfriend
Or someone who seemed good enough
For me to share my feelings with
When life's troubles got too tough

You can always make me laugh
Or even show a smile
I love spending time with you
For just a little while

Who has the perfect face
and feelings that are so true
No one that I know of
Can half compare to you

People said so many things'That turned out to be lies
I don't care about the details
Of looks shape, or size

I'm writing this poem for you
Because you mean so muh to me
Words Aren't enough to express
What I hope is meant to be

...We used to be so close, but my frien is kind o taking him away, so should I give it to him as a last stitch effort, or no? Please help, thanks!